2017 Competitions
Narrative Shorts Competition
WINNER
Mordechai
Directed by Benjamin Bee
Produced by Maria Caruana Galizia
RUNNER-UP
Sure-Fire
Directed by Michael Goldburg
Produced by Michael Goldburg & Dave Chan
Documentary Shorts Competition
WINNER
The Last Projectionist
Directed by Eugene Lehnert & Christopher Pecoraro
Produced by Christopher Pecoraro & Helge Bernhardt
RUNNER-UP
Will Strip For Change
Directed by Travis Mauck
Animated Films Competition
WINNER
Agrinoui
Directed by Alexis Chaviaras
Writen by Alexis Chaviaras, Christiana Vasiliou
RUNNER-UP
I Went Ahead and Did it Anyway
Directed by Pei Jung Wang
Produced by Mitchell Leonard & Pei Jung Wang
Music Videos Competition
WINNER
Take Your Time
Directed by Max Sachar & Natasha Adorlee Johnson
RUNNER-UP
Shadows Of My Mind
Directed by Peter Harton
Produced by Nicolai Berthelsen
Screenplay Competition
FIRST PLACE
Synopsis: A British trench in France, April 1916, the height of World War One. Thomas, a British soldier, has been playing the same tune on his harmonica for weeks – the only tune he knows. His pals are sick and tired of it, and when he plays it again, one of them grabs the harmonica and throws it out to no man’s land. But it comes flying back – with a note from Paul, a German soldier, who’s looking to trade the harmonica back for food. Paul and Thomas start meeting in no man’s land and become fast friends. But when a major German attack looms, their friendship is sorely tested. “Music Between Us” is about friendship in times of war. It explores how we make friends, how friendship changes our lives, and the difficult choices we face when we bind our lives with the lives of others.
Bio: When not writing plays and scripts, Tal Rayman works in the technology sector and spends time with his wife, kids and cat. Tal is a graduate of Tel Aviv University’s English and Life Sciences Departments. His first play, “A Cricket, A Grasshopper” was selected for the 2013 Pittsburgh New Works Festival. “Music Between Us”, his second play, was selected for the 2016 Different Readings festival at the Santa Fe Playhouse and has won several writing awards.
SECOND PLACE
Synopsis: When a king hears assassins creeping into his bedchamber, he knows his past has caught up with him. He must escape and make his way through caves where a deadly horror lurks, an erotic brothel where love is laced with betrayal, savage battles and gruesome mass graves – all for one chance at redemption, and bloody revenge.
Bio: Christian Thomas teaches writing at UC Santa Barbara, and works as a narrative designer in the video game industry. He has an MFA from the Creative Writing Workshop at the University of New Orleans.
THIRD PLACE
Synopsis: When the daughter of wealthy power couple Luke and Janice Dodd receives a music box for her eighth birthday, strange things begin to happen and people around them start to die. Luke soon discovers that this seemingly innocent gift holds clues to a terrible family secret.
Bios: Julie L. Moran is a producer, writer and screenwriter whose works include a series (now an upcoming film), Miss Beverly Hills Ghost, co-written with Kemmy Moran, which has been selected for and won awards in numerous film festivals; her recent short story, “Lunch With Debbie” which earned a grand prize in the Writer’s Digest Annual Writing Competition; and her most recent screenplay, “Devil to Play,” also co-written with Kemmy, which has placed in film festivals. Julie received her Master’s of Professional Writing degree from the University of Southern California and her law degree from Fordham University School of Law. Kemmy Moran is a screenwriter, director, and producer. She began her career in production at The Institute, co-owned by Michael Bay, and headed Sundance-winning director Matthew Harrison’s Film Crash screenplay competition. When Kemmy’s second screenplay placed in the Academy’s Nicholl screenplay competition, she decided to use her degree from Pepperdine Law School to co-found her own production company: MissDirection Entertainment, whose first production, award-winning series/film Miss Beverly Hills Ghost, is Kemmy’s directorial debut.
FINALISTS
(in alphabetical order)
10 Essential Tips for Making a Good Film
Tip 1: Develop a Compelling Story
At the core of every great film lies a compelling story that resonates with the audience. The screenplay serves as the blueprint for the narrative, characters, and themes. Crafting a story with a clear structure, engaging characters, and a unique perspective is paramount. A great story evokes emotions, provokes thoughts, and offers a fresh perspective on the human experience.
Tip 2: Embrace Pre-production
The adage “failing to prepare is preparing to fail” rings true in the realm of filmmaking. Pre-production is a critical phase that demands meticulous planning. During this stage, aspiring filmmakers engage in casting the right actors, scouting suitable locations, storyboarding, and creating a detailed production schedule. Adequate time invested in pre-production leads to smoother shoots and more efficient resource utilization.
Tip 3: Focus on Cinematography
Visual storytelling lies at the heart of filmmaking. Collaborate closely with a skilled cinematographer to establish a visual style that enhances the narrative. Factors such as composition, lighting, color palette, and camera movements play crucial roles in creating captivating and visually memorable experiences for the audience.
Tip 4: Captivate with Sound
Sound design is an often-underestimated aspect of filmmaking that significantly impacts the immersive experience. The capturing of high-quality dialogue, meticulous sound mixing, and the integration of music and sound effects contribute to the overall ambiance and emotional depth of the film. Paying attention to sound design ensures that audiences are fully engaged in the story unfolding on the screen.
Tip 5: Pay Attention to Production Design
The art of production design brings the film’s world to life, transporting audiences into a vivid and believable environment. Whether it’s a period piece or a futuristic setting, meticulous attention to detail in production design adds authenticity, enhancing the overall visual impact and immersive quality of the film.
Tip 6: Collaborate Effectively
Filmmaking is an inherently collaborative process, requiring the smooth blending of various talents and perspectives. Cultivate a positive and collaborative environment, fostering open communication, and valuing the input of your cast and crew. Surround yourself with passionate and talented individuals who share your vision, enabling you to bring out the best in each other.
Tip 7: Edit with Precision
The editing process is where the raw footage is transformed into a cohesive and impactful story. Pay close attention to pacing, narrative flow, and the rhythm of the film. Trimming unnecessary scenes, tightening the narrative, and leveraging editing techniques enhance the emotional impact and audience engagement with the story.
Tip 8: Seek Feedback
Early feedback from trusted individuals provides valuable insights and helps identify areas for improvement. Screen your film to a diverse group of viewers and be receptive to constructive criticism. Utilize this feedback to refine your work, making necessary adjustments that elevate the quality of your film.
Tip 9: Distribution and Marketing Strategy
A great film deserves an effective distribution and marketing strategy to reach its intended audience. Research the target demographic, identify suitable film festivals, explore distribution platforms, and invest in marketing efforts to create awareness and generate anticipation around your film. A well-executed strategy can significantly increase the chances of your film being seen and appreciated by a wider audience.
Tip 10: Persistence and Perseverance
Filmmaking is a demanding and competitive industry. Success rarely comes overnight, and setbacks are common along the journey. It is crucial to remain persistent and resilient in the face of challenges. Learn from failures, seek inspiration from other filmmakers, and continue to hone your craft. Surround yourself with a supportive community of fellow filmmakers who can provide encouragement and valuable insights.
The Hero’s Journey: Saving Screenplays One Structure at a Time
Now, I must confess, when I first stumbled upon the Hero’s Journey, I thought it was some sort of mythical quest. I imagined myself in a knight’s armor, armed with a laptop and a jar of quill pens, battling a fierce dragon named Procrastination. Little did I know that the Hero’s Journey was more about storytelling than slaying actual beasts. Talk about a disappointment.
But fear not, my fellow adventurers, for within the depths of this ancient narrative framework lies the key to unlocking the potential of your screenplays. You see, the Hero’s Journey is like a trusty map, guiding you through the treacherous landscape of your story. It tells you where to go, whom to meet, and how to keep the audience glued to their seats with anticipation (or perhaps a vat of buttery popcorn).
So, let us delve into the Hero’s Journey and its fabulous components, shall we?
First, we have the Call to Adventure. Think of it as a distress signal from your protagonist, begging you to throw them into an extraordinary situation. But remember, folks, a call to adventure doesn’t mean your hero has to receive a phone call from a desperate princess trapped in a tower. Be creative! Perhaps your hero’s adventure starts when they receive a mysterious email promising them a lifetime supply of free pizza if they can solve a mind-boggling riddle. The possibilities are endless!
Next up, we have the Special World—a place where your hero’s life gets turned upside down, much like a clown on a unicycle. This world is filled with peculiar characters, mind-bending challenges, and more twists than a contortionist at a yoga class. Embrace the weirdness, my friends! Let your hero meet a talking llama, battle a ferocious army of garden gnomes, or even discover a parallel universe where everyone communicates through interpretive dance. The crazier, the better!
Of course, no hero’s journey would be complete without a healthy dose of Trials and Tribulations. Think of these as obstacles that make your hero’s life resemble a roller coaster ride—minus the screaming and motion sickness, hopefully. Picture your hero facing everything from sassy villains with impeccable fashion sense to mind-bending riddles that would make even the Sphinx break a sweat. And don’t forget to sprinkle in a pinch of comedic relief, like a moment when your hero accidentally trips and sends a flock of pigeons soaring into the air. Laughter is the best seasoning, after all!
But wait, there’s more! The Hero’s Journey also calls for a transformation, a moment where your hero goes from zero to superhero (minus the spandex and the ability to fly). It’s like witnessing the metamorphosis of a butterfly emerging from its cocoon, only with more explosions and witty comebacks. Let your hero discover hidden talents, overcome their self-doubt, and emerge as the ultimate badass with a heart of gold. Audiences love a good underdog story, so give ’em what they want!
Now, my fellow screenwriters, armed with the knowledge of the Hero’s Journey, go forth and conquer the blank page. Let your imagination soar higher than a superhero in a mid-air battle with a nemesis. Remember, the Hero’s Journey is not a strict formula but a guide, a companion to help you navigate the perilous waters of screenplay structure.
And let us not forget the power of humor. Inject your screenplay with comedy that tickles the funny bones of your audience. Make them snort with laughter, spill their popcorn, and annoy their fellow moviegoers with excessive guffawing. Remember, a well-timed joke can turn a dramatic moment into a memorable one, just like that awkward family member who shows up uninvited to a formal event.
But my friends, as we navigate the Hero’s Journey, let us not become slaves to structure. The Hero’s Journey is a tool, not a dictator. If your story calls for a detour, take it. If your hero needs a moment of self-reflection in a coffee shop instead of slaying dragons, let them sip their latte and ponder the meaning of life. Flexibility is the key to creating authentic, engaging stories that resonate with audiences.
Embrace the Hero’s Journey as a trusted companion on your writing adventure. Let it guide you, inspire you, and provide you with a roadmap to create captivating stories that leave audiences craving more. And above all, remember that storytelling is an art form, and rules are meant to be bent, twisted, and spun like a web of intrigue.
So, go forth, my fellow screenwriting warriors! Unleash your creativity, sprinkle your scripts with humor, and remember to enjoy the ride. The Hero’s Journey awaits, ready to transform your screenplay from a mere idea into a cinematic masterpiece that will have audiences cheering, laughing, and maybe even shedding a tear or two.
Now, if you’ll excuse me, I have a screenplay to write—a tale of an eccentric tea-drinking octopus who embarks on a quest to find the legendary teapot of eternal steeping. Until next time, keep writing, keep laughing, and may the Hero’s Journey guide you to storytelling greatness!
Writing the Perfect Synopsis
A synopsis is a concise summary of your screenplay, typically several sentences or paragraphs. First, let’s explore what it is not.
A synopsis is not a tagline. A tagline is a one-line. movie poster slogan like, “In Space, no-one can hear you scream,” which is from the movie Alien. It is not a logline either. A logline is a one or two sentence summary of your screenplay that conveys the premise but also adds an emotional aspect that hooks the reader. It includes the main character, set-up, and central conflict in a concise, enticing way. It is used to pitch your script to a potentially interested party without giving further details. Usually a logline will accompany a synopsis or treatment.
And, of course, a synopsis is not a treatment. A treatment is a detailed summary of a film or television show. It should communicate all of the essential scenes, themes, and tone of the project to entice or pitch to buyers and producers into reading, developing, or even purchasing your idea. Treatments can be several pages but are always at least a few pages because of the detail it should offer. The key elements of a treatment include a title, your name and contact information, a logline, the key characters and a detailed summary of the story.
So now that we established what a synopsis is not, let’s breakdown what it is. A synopsis serves as an introduction to your story, providing an overview of the plot, characters, themes, and tone. Writing a solid synopsis is crucial for pitching your screenplay to producers, agents, or potential investors. Not everyone is willing to invest the time in reading the full script or even the treatment but they’re usually willing to read a synopsis to decide if the concept intrigues them. A logline can also be used at this point to entice them but it doesn’t offer enough detail for the prospective party to decide if they are interested in the project. This is the role of the synopsis and why it needs to be as solid as possible. It may be your one chance to impress.
Here are some tips to help you write a perfect synopsis:
Start with a strong hook
Your synopsis should start with a hook that grabs the reader’s attention and entices them to keep reading. This could be a powerful opening line or a provocative statement that summarizes the essence of your story.
Keep it concise
A synopsis should be brief and to the point. Stick to the essential plot points and avoid unnecessary details. Ideally, your synopsis should be no more than two pages long.
Focus on the main characters
Your synopsis should introduce the main characters and give a sense of their motivations, conflicts, and arcs. Avoid including too many secondary characters or plotlines, as this can make your synopsis feel cluttered and confusing.
Highlight the major plot points
Your synopsis should summarize the major plot points of your screenplay, including the inciting incident, the midpoint, the climax, and the resolution. Make sure to convey the emotional stakes of each plot point and how they affect the characters.
Convey the tone and style of your screenplay
Your synopsis should give the reader a sense of the tone and style of your screenplay. Is it a comedy, drama, or thriller? Is it fast-paced or slow-burning? Make sure to convey the mood and atmosphere of your story.
Use active voice
Choosing the right words in the right order can have a massive impact on the overall meaning of a sentence. One of the ways a writer can organize and maximize their words is through active vs passive voice. Active voice is the direct way in which you can distinguish who is performing what action.
Active voice can shorten your sentences and keep your writing efficient. If you are writing a screenplay, for example, the goal is to have a good black-to-white balance on your page. It also helps to avoid wordy sentences that detract from the the important elements in the scene. Write your synopsis in the active voice, using strong verbs and vivid language. This will help convey the energy and urgency of your story.
Proofread and edit
Finally, make sure to proofread and edit your synopsis carefully. Check for typos, grammatical errors, sentence structure and inconsistencies. Make sure your synopsis is clear, concise, and compelling.
Example of a Well-written Synopsis
Title: The Last Stand
Logline: A retired soldier is forced to take up arms again when a group of terrorists take over a small town in the American heartland.
Synopsis:
John Smith is a retired Army Ranger living a quiet life in a small town in Kansas. But when a group of heavily armed terrorists take over the town and hold its inhabitants hostage, John finds himself forced to take up arms again.
As the terrorists tighten their grip on the town, John teams up with a group of local residents to mount a counter-attack. With the help of his military training and his innate sense of duty, John leads the charge against the terrorists, risking everything to save his community.
But as the violence escalates and the body count rises, John begins to question whether he can truly make a difference. Will he be able to overcome his own demons and save the town from destruction, or will he be forced to confront the limits of his own heroism?
Film Competition Tips
Winning a film competition can be an incredible accomplishment for any aspiring filmmaker. It can open up opportunities for exposure, recognition, and even possible funding for future projects. However, winning a film competition is not always an easy task. It requires hard work, dedication, and a great deal of creativity. In this article, we’ll discuss some tips and strategies for successfully placing in a film competition.
Choose the right competition
Before entering any film competition, it is essential to research and select the right one for your film. Not all competitions are created equal, and some may not be suitable for your specific genre or style of filmmaking. Be sure to carefully read the competition rules, submission requirements, and judging criteria to ensure that your film meets all of the necessary qualifications.
Follow the rules
It may seem obvious, but it is crucial to follow all of the competition rules and guidelines when submitting your film. Failure to do so can result in disqualification, regardless of the quality of your film. Take the time to read and understand the rules thoroughly, and ensure that you submit your film on time and in the required format.
Tell a compelling story
At the end of the day, a great film is all about telling a compelling story. When crafting your film, focus on creating a narrative that will resonate with your audience and judges. Use strong characters, interesting conflicts, and engaging dialogue to captivate your viewers and leave a lasting impression.
Show off your technical skills
While storytelling is crucial, it’s also essential to demonstrate your technical skills as a filmmaker. Use interesting camera angles, lighting techniques, and sound design to create a visually stunning film that stands out from the competition. Pay attention to the small details, such as color grading and editing, to ensure that your film looks and feels professional.
Promote your film
Once you have submitted your film, it’s essential to promote it as much as possible. Share it on social media, encourage your friends and family to watch it, and reach out to any relevant film industry contacts you may have. The more exposure your film receives, the more likely it is to be noticed by the judges and stand out from the competition.
Be patient
Finally, it’s important to remember that winning a film competition takes time and patience. Even if you don’t win the first competition you enter, don’t give up. Use the feedback and critiques you receive to improve your filmmaking skills and continue entering competitions until you achieve your goals.
Winning a film competition requires a combination of talent, hard work, and strategy. By following these tips, you can increase your chances of success and take the first step towards a successful career in filmmaking.
Writing the Perfect Screenplay
Here are some tips on how to write the perfect screenplay:
Develop a compelling story
The first step in writing a perfect screenplay is to develop a compelling story. A good story is the heart of any great film. You need to have a clear understanding of what your story is about, what themes you want to explore, and what message you want to convey.
Start by brainstorming different ideas and concepts for your story. Once you have a few ideas, try to develop them further. Create character bios, plot outlines, and detailed backstories. This will help you get a better understanding of your story and the characters that inhabit it.
Create memorable characters
Creating memorable characters is an essential part of writing a perfect screenplay. Your characters should be well-developed, unique, and relatable. They should have their own voice, motivations, and flaws.
When creating characters, think about their backstory, their desires, and their relationships with other characters. This will help you create fully fleshed-out characters that are interesting to watch on screen.
Write a solid outline
A solid outline is an essential part of writing a perfect screenplay. Your outline should include all the major beats of your story, including the beginning, the middle, and the end.
Start by creating a basic outline of your story. Then, flesh out each beat with more details, including character actions, dialogue, and subplots. This will help you get a clear picture of your story and ensure that it flows smoothly.
Focus on dialogue
Dialogue is a critical component of any screenplay. It is the primary way that characters communicate with each other and move the story forward.
When writing dialogue, make sure that it is realistic, engaging, and relevant to the story. Each character should have their own unique voice, and the dialogue should reveal their personality, motivations, and conflicts.
Show, don’t tell
Showing, not telling, is a critical element of writing a perfect screenplay. This means that you should focus on visual storytelling rather than relying on exposition or narration.
Use visual cues, character actions, and dialogue to convey information to the audience. This will help you create a more immersive and engaging story that draws the audience in.
Edit and revise
Editing and revising are essential parts of writing a perfect screenplay. After you have completed your first draft, take some time to review and revise it.
Look for areas where the story could be improved, characters that need more development, or dialogue that could be tightened. Use feedback from others to help you identify areas that could be improved.
Formatting
Formatting is an important aspect of writing a perfect screenplay. A well-formatted screenplay is easier to read and understand, and it shows that you are a professional.
Use a software program like Final Draft to format your screenplay properly. This will ensure that it follows industry standards and is easy to read by potential producers and agents.
Writing a perfect screenplay is clearly a challenging task that requires a lot of hard work and dedication. The aforementioned tips are just a starting point to help guide you towards a first draft of something that has the potential of being great after multiple revisions. Don’t be afraid of cutting out scenes or characters if they are not moving the story along or adding confusion. And at a certain point you need to let others read your screenplay in order to receive honest, fresh feedback that can help further shape the story and smooth out the rough edges. With these elements in place, you can write the perfect screenplay that will captivate audiences and leave a lasting impact. Good luck.
HONORABLE MENTIONS
(in alphabetical order)
10 Essential Tips for Making a Good Film
Tip 1: Develop a Compelling Story
At the core of every great film lies a compelling story that resonates with the audience. The screenplay serves as the blueprint for the narrative, characters, and themes. Crafting a story with a clear structure, engaging characters, and a unique perspective is paramount. A great story evokes emotions, provokes thoughts, and offers a fresh perspective on the human experience.
Tip 2: Embrace Pre-production
The adage “failing to prepare is preparing to fail” rings true in the realm of filmmaking. Pre-production is a critical phase that demands meticulous planning. During this stage, aspiring filmmakers engage in casting the right actors, scouting suitable locations, storyboarding, and creating a detailed production schedule. Adequate time invested in pre-production leads to smoother shoots and more efficient resource utilization.
Tip 3: Focus on Cinematography
Visual storytelling lies at the heart of filmmaking. Collaborate closely with a skilled cinematographer to establish a visual style that enhances the narrative. Factors such as composition, lighting, color palette, and camera movements play crucial roles in creating captivating and visually memorable experiences for the audience.
Tip 4: Captivate with Sound
Sound design is an often-underestimated aspect of filmmaking that significantly impacts the immersive experience. The capturing of high-quality dialogue, meticulous sound mixing, and the integration of music and sound effects contribute to the overall ambiance and emotional depth of the film. Paying attention to sound design ensures that audiences are fully engaged in the story unfolding on the screen.
Tip 5: Pay Attention to Production Design
The art of production design brings the film’s world to life, transporting audiences into a vivid and believable environment. Whether it’s a period piece or a futuristic setting, meticulous attention to detail in production design adds authenticity, enhancing the overall visual impact and immersive quality of the film.
Tip 6: Collaborate Effectively
Filmmaking is an inherently collaborative process, requiring the smooth blending of various talents and perspectives. Cultivate a positive and collaborative environment, fostering open communication, and valuing the input of your cast and crew. Surround yourself with passionate and talented individuals who share your vision, enabling you to bring out the best in each other.
Tip 7: Edit with Precision
The editing process is where the raw footage is transformed into a cohesive and impactful story. Pay close attention to pacing, narrative flow, and the rhythm of the film. Trimming unnecessary scenes, tightening the narrative, and leveraging editing techniques enhance the emotional impact and audience engagement with the story.
Tip 8: Seek Feedback
Early feedback from trusted individuals provides valuable insights and helps identify areas for improvement. Screen your film to a diverse group of viewers and be receptive to constructive criticism. Utilize this feedback to refine your work, making necessary adjustments that elevate the quality of your film.
Tip 9: Distribution and Marketing Strategy
A great film deserves an effective distribution and marketing strategy to reach its intended audience. Research the target demographic, identify suitable film festivals, explore distribution platforms, and invest in marketing efforts to create awareness and generate anticipation around your film. A well-executed strategy can significantly increase the chances of your film being seen and appreciated by a wider audience.
Tip 10: Persistence and Perseverance
Filmmaking is a demanding and competitive industry. Success rarely comes overnight, and setbacks are common along the journey. It is crucial to remain persistent and resilient in the face of challenges. Learn from failures, seek inspiration from other filmmakers, and continue to hone your craft. Surround yourself with a supportive community of fellow filmmakers who can provide encouragement and valuable insights.
The Hero’s Journey: Saving Screenplays One Structure at a Time
Now, I must confess, when I first stumbled upon the Hero’s Journey, I thought it was some sort of mythical quest. I imagined myself in a knight’s armor, armed with a laptop and a jar of quill pens, battling a fierce dragon named Procrastination. Little did I know that the Hero’s Journey was more about storytelling than slaying actual beasts. Talk about a disappointment.
But fear not, my fellow adventurers, for within the depths of this ancient narrative framework lies the key to unlocking the potential of your screenplays. You see, the Hero’s Journey is like a trusty map, guiding you through the treacherous landscape of your story. It tells you where to go, whom to meet, and how to keep the audience glued to their seats with anticipation (or perhaps a vat of buttery popcorn).
So, let us delve into the Hero’s Journey and its fabulous components, shall we?
First, we have the Call to Adventure. Think of it as a distress signal from your protagonist, begging you to throw them into an extraordinary situation. But remember, folks, a call to adventure doesn’t mean your hero has to receive a phone call from a desperate princess trapped in a tower. Be creative! Perhaps your hero’s adventure starts when they receive a mysterious email promising them a lifetime supply of free pizza if they can solve a mind-boggling riddle. The possibilities are endless!
Next up, we have the Special World—a place where your hero’s life gets turned upside down, much like a clown on a unicycle. This world is filled with peculiar characters, mind-bending challenges, and more twists than a contortionist at a yoga class. Embrace the weirdness, my friends! Let your hero meet a talking llama, battle a ferocious army of garden gnomes, or even discover a parallel universe where everyone communicates through interpretive dance. The crazier, the better!
Of course, no hero’s journey would be complete without a healthy dose of Trials and Tribulations. Think of these as obstacles that make your hero’s life resemble a roller coaster ride—minus the screaming and motion sickness, hopefully. Picture your hero facing everything from sassy villains with impeccable fashion sense to mind-bending riddles that would make even the Sphinx break a sweat. And don’t forget to sprinkle in a pinch of comedic relief, like a moment when your hero accidentally trips and sends a flock of pigeons soaring into the air. Laughter is the best seasoning, after all!
But wait, there’s more! The Hero’s Journey also calls for a transformation, a moment where your hero goes from zero to superhero (minus the spandex and the ability to fly). It’s like witnessing the metamorphosis of a butterfly emerging from its cocoon, only with more explosions and witty comebacks. Let your hero discover hidden talents, overcome their self-doubt, and emerge as the ultimate badass with a heart of gold. Audiences love a good underdog story, so give ’em what they want!
Now, my fellow screenwriters, armed with the knowledge of the Hero’s Journey, go forth and conquer the blank page. Let your imagination soar higher than a superhero in a mid-air battle with a nemesis. Remember, the Hero’s Journey is not a strict formula but a guide, a companion to help you navigate the perilous waters of screenplay structure.
And let us not forget the power of humor. Inject your screenplay with comedy that tickles the funny bones of your audience. Make them snort with laughter, spill their popcorn, and annoy their fellow moviegoers with excessive guffawing. Remember, a well-timed joke can turn a dramatic moment into a memorable one, just like that awkward family member who shows up uninvited to a formal event.
But my friends, as we navigate the Hero’s Journey, let us not become slaves to structure. The Hero’s Journey is a tool, not a dictator. If your story calls for a detour, take it. If your hero needs a moment of self-reflection in a coffee shop instead of slaying dragons, let them sip their latte and ponder the meaning of life. Flexibility is the key to creating authentic, engaging stories that resonate with audiences.
Embrace the Hero’s Journey as a trusted companion on your writing adventure. Let it guide you, inspire you, and provide you with a roadmap to create captivating stories that leave audiences craving more. And above all, remember that storytelling is an art form, and rules are meant to be bent, twisted, and spun like a web of intrigue.
So, go forth, my fellow screenwriting warriors! Unleash your creativity, sprinkle your scripts with humor, and remember to enjoy the ride. The Hero’s Journey awaits, ready to transform your screenplay from a mere idea into a cinematic masterpiece that will have audiences cheering, laughing, and maybe even shedding a tear or two.
Now, if you’ll excuse me, I have a screenplay to write—a tale of an eccentric tea-drinking octopus who embarks on a quest to find the legendary teapot of eternal steeping. Until next time, keep writing, keep laughing, and may the Hero’s Journey guide you to storytelling greatness!
Writing the Perfect Synopsis
A synopsis is a concise summary of your screenplay, typically several sentences or paragraphs. First, let’s explore what it is not.
A synopsis is not a tagline. A tagline is a one-line. movie poster slogan like, “In Space, no-one can hear you scream,” which is from the movie Alien. It is not a logline either. A logline is a one or two sentence summary of your screenplay that conveys the premise but also adds an emotional aspect that hooks the reader. It includes the main character, set-up, and central conflict in a concise, enticing way. It is used to pitch your script to a potentially interested party without giving further details. Usually a logline will accompany a synopsis or treatment.
And, of course, a synopsis is not a treatment. A treatment is a detailed summary of a film or television show. It should communicate all of the essential scenes, themes, and tone of the project to entice or pitch to buyers and producers into reading, developing, or even purchasing your idea. Treatments can be several pages but are always at least a few pages because of the detail it should offer. The key elements of a treatment include a title, your name and contact information, a logline, the key characters and a detailed summary of the story.
So now that we established what a synopsis is not, let’s breakdown what it is. A synopsis serves as an introduction to your story, providing an overview of the plot, characters, themes, and tone. Writing a solid synopsis is crucial for pitching your screenplay to producers, agents, or potential investors. Not everyone is willing to invest the time in reading the full script or even the treatment but they’re usually willing to read a synopsis to decide if the concept intrigues them. A logline can also be used at this point to entice them but it doesn’t offer enough detail for the prospective party to decide if they are interested in the project. This is the role of the synopsis and why it needs to be as solid as possible. It may be your one chance to impress.
Here are some tips to help you write a perfect synopsis:
Start with a strong hook
Your synopsis should start with a hook that grabs the reader’s attention and entices them to keep reading. This could be a powerful opening line or a provocative statement that summarizes the essence of your story.
Keep it concise
A synopsis should be brief and to the point. Stick to the essential plot points and avoid unnecessary details. Ideally, your synopsis should be no more than two pages long.
Focus on the main characters
Your synopsis should introduce the main characters and give a sense of their motivations, conflicts, and arcs. Avoid including too many secondary characters or plotlines, as this can make your synopsis feel cluttered and confusing.
Highlight the major plot points
Your synopsis should summarize the major plot points of your screenplay, including the inciting incident, the midpoint, the climax, and the resolution. Make sure to convey the emotional stakes of each plot point and how they affect the characters.
Convey the tone and style of your screenplay
Your synopsis should give the reader a sense of the tone and style of your screenplay. Is it a comedy, drama, or thriller? Is it fast-paced or slow-burning? Make sure to convey the mood and atmosphere of your story.
Use active voice
Choosing the right words in the right order can have a massive impact on the overall meaning of a sentence. One of the ways a writer can organize and maximize their words is through active vs passive voice. Active voice is the direct way in which you can distinguish who is performing what action.
Active voice can shorten your sentences and keep your writing efficient. If you are writing a screenplay, for example, the goal is to have a good black-to-white balance on your page. It also helps to avoid wordy sentences that detract from the the important elements in the scene. Write your synopsis in the active voice, using strong verbs and vivid language. This will help convey the energy and urgency of your story.
Proofread and edit
Finally, make sure to proofread and edit your synopsis carefully. Check for typos, grammatical errors, sentence structure and inconsistencies. Make sure your synopsis is clear, concise, and compelling.
Example of a Well-written Synopsis
Title: The Last Stand
Logline: A retired soldier is forced to take up arms again when a group of terrorists take over a small town in the American heartland.
Synopsis:
John Smith is a retired Army Ranger living a quiet life in a small town in Kansas. But when a group of heavily armed terrorists take over the town and hold its inhabitants hostage, John finds himself forced to take up arms again.
As the terrorists tighten their grip on the town, John teams up with a group of local residents to mount a counter-attack. With the help of his military training and his innate sense of duty, John leads the charge against the terrorists, risking everything to save his community.
But as the violence escalates and the body count rises, John begins to question whether he can truly make a difference. Will he be able to overcome his own demons and save the town from destruction, or will he be forced to confront the limits of his own heroism?
Film Competition Tips
Winning a film competition can be an incredible accomplishment for any aspiring filmmaker. It can open up opportunities for exposure, recognition, and even possible funding for future projects. However, winning a film competition is not always an easy task. It requires hard work, dedication, and a great deal of creativity. In this article, we’ll discuss some tips and strategies for successfully placing in a film competition.
Choose the right competition
Before entering any film competition, it is essential to research and select the right one for your film. Not all competitions are created equal, and some may not be suitable for your specific genre or style of filmmaking. Be sure to carefully read the competition rules, submission requirements, and judging criteria to ensure that your film meets all of the necessary qualifications.
Follow the rules
It may seem obvious, but it is crucial to follow all of the competition rules and guidelines when submitting your film. Failure to do so can result in disqualification, regardless of the quality of your film. Take the time to read and understand the rules thoroughly, and ensure that you submit your film on time and in the required format.
Tell a compelling story
At the end of the day, a great film is all about telling a compelling story. When crafting your film, focus on creating a narrative that will resonate with your audience and judges. Use strong characters, interesting conflicts, and engaging dialogue to captivate your viewers and leave a lasting impression.
Show off your technical skills
While storytelling is crucial, it’s also essential to demonstrate your technical skills as a filmmaker. Use interesting camera angles, lighting techniques, and sound design to create a visually stunning film that stands out from the competition. Pay attention to the small details, such as color grading and editing, to ensure that your film looks and feels professional.
Promote your film
Once you have submitted your film, it’s essential to promote it as much as possible. Share it on social media, encourage your friends and family to watch it, and reach out to any relevant film industry contacts you may have. The more exposure your film receives, the more likely it is to be noticed by the judges and stand out from the competition.
Be patient
Finally, it’s important to remember that winning a film competition takes time and patience. Even if you don’t win the first competition you enter, don’t give up. Use the feedback and critiques you receive to improve your filmmaking skills and continue entering competitions until you achieve your goals.
Winning a film competition requires a combination of talent, hard work, and strategy. By following these tips, you can increase your chances of success and take the first step towards a successful career in filmmaking.
Writing the Perfect Screenplay
Here are some tips on how to write the perfect screenplay:
Develop a compelling story
The first step in writing a perfect screenplay is to develop a compelling story. A good story is the heart of any great film. You need to have a clear understanding of what your story is about, what themes you want to explore, and what message you want to convey.
Start by brainstorming different ideas and concepts for your story. Once you have a few ideas, try to develop them further. Create character bios, plot outlines, and detailed backstories. This will help you get a better understanding of your story and the characters that inhabit it.
Create memorable characters
Creating memorable characters is an essential part of writing a perfect screenplay. Your characters should be well-developed, unique, and relatable. They should have their own voice, motivations, and flaws.
When creating characters, think about their backstory, their desires, and their relationships with other characters. This will help you create fully fleshed-out characters that are interesting to watch on screen.
Write a solid outline
A solid outline is an essential part of writing a perfect screenplay. Your outline should include all the major beats of your story, including the beginning, the middle, and the end.
Start by creating a basic outline of your story. Then, flesh out each beat with more details, including character actions, dialogue, and subplots. This will help you get a clear picture of your story and ensure that it flows smoothly.
Focus on dialogue
Dialogue is a critical component of any screenplay. It is the primary way that characters communicate with each other and move the story forward.
When writing dialogue, make sure that it is realistic, engaging, and relevant to the story. Each character should have their own unique voice, and the dialogue should reveal their personality, motivations, and conflicts.
Show, don’t tell
Showing, not telling, is a critical element of writing a perfect screenplay. This means that you should focus on visual storytelling rather than relying on exposition or narration.
Use visual cues, character actions, and dialogue to convey information to the audience. This will help you create a more immersive and engaging story that draws the audience in.
Edit and revise
Editing and revising are essential parts of writing a perfect screenplay. After you have completed your first draft, take some time to review and revise it.
Look for areas where the story could be improved, characters that need more development, or dialogue that could be tightened. Use feedback from others to help you identify areas that could be improved.
Formatting
Formatting is an important aspect of writing a perfect screenplay. A well-formatted screenplay is easier to read and understand, and it shows that you are a professional.
Use a software program like Final Draft to format your screenplay properly. This will ensure that it follows industry standards and is easy to read by potential producers and agents.
Writing a perfect screenplay is clearly a challenging task that requires a lot of hard work and dedication. The aforementioned tips are just a starting point to help guide you towards a first draft of something that has the potential of being great after multiple revisions. Don’t be afraid of cutting out scenes or characters if they are not moving the story along or adding confusion. And at a certain point you need to let others read your screenplay in order to receive honest, fresh feedback that can help further shape the story and smooth out the rough edges. With these elements in place, you can write the perfect screenplay that will captivate audiences and leave a lasting impact. Good luck.
Commercial Competition
The Pitch
Client: Cannondale
Roberto Serrini
Bio: Serrini studied writing, then photography, then editing to become a director. His style is a culmination of these tools, combined with the learned appreciation for communication that one acquires being a professional traveller. His focus in on small stories with big emotions, advertising that gets you thinking, and films that get you feeling.
FIRST PLACE
Concept: What goes on in a creative’s mind when he pitches a new idea… maybe now we know.
SECOND PLACE
Two friends find a weird looking leaf blower and decide to show their friend Brian. The goal of this commercial was to think of a fun and clever way to cycle through all the stereotypes of what usually sells in a Doritos commercial (a baby, a puppy, a pretty woman).
THIRD PLACE
Highly technical and great fun, shot in 3D using two Phantom High Speed Digital Cameras…here presented in 2D.
Soundtrack Competition
The Cabin Soundtrack
directed by
Andrea Izzy Anthony and Jean Goto
music by
Alec Ferrell
The Cabin (short) is a dark comedy about the challenge of human companionship in a post-apocalyptic world. Jai and Ivy struggle to align their priorities. Unfortunately they find that the apocalypse isn’t funny anymore.
WINNER
Alec Ferrell has over a quarter-century of experience in music performance, production, and composition. A veteran of New York City-based bands Skeleton Key, The Holy Ghost, and Steve Shiffman & The Land of No, Ferrell has worked in Durham, NC, since 2010, with such varied artists as The Big Picture, Hog, Hospital Smokers, Voidward, and Shirlette Ammons. Ferrell is the proprietor of Clearly Records and leader of meta-rock band The All Things. He has toured extensively, opened for everyone, played on a ton of records, and has a “solid write hook.” The Cabin is his first short film soundtrack. Alec would like to extend his deepest thanks to Andrea Izzy Anthony and Jean Goto for the opportunity to help tell this story of two souls on the edge of apocalypse. Lastly, he and John Williams have the same birthday, so there’s that.
HONORABLE MENTION
Steven von Kampen is a composer working in Southern California. His influences range from Bernard Herrmann to Cliff Martinez. Steven describes his scores as a “lush minimalism that stays out of the way, yet still provides an unforced emotional impact.”